By the time I was finished they had all shut their mouths and are now sitting in a corner behaving themselves tell me they will be good if I promise not to put the scene in the way I just wrote. They got everything they wanted and then some. Hehe.
The thing is I'm going to have to take this and put it aside and do something else with it but because, damn it's good. It doesn't belong in this book however in this story. I may have to do another book of short stories under a pseudonym because it is bad and I never want anyone I know to know that I wrote this. It's so bad and evil and wicked, even for me. I must say, and I'm almost ashamed to admit it, I loved it.
Oh I think my friends have shut up as well. They agree not in this book but they hare hoping that I will do a book where I can use it. I'm happy.